Thursday, December 16, 2010

Valley

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  1. bluepaw looks around for prey.thinking of icepaw more then prey.

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  2. Icepaw finds a mouse and kills it, but he isn't really thinking about it. He killed the mouse instinctually without thinking. He is only really thinking about Bluepaw. Bluepaw is so beautiful and graceful when she is hunting. I wonder what she is thinking about? he wonders.
    ~Icepaw~

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  3. bluepaw smiles to herdelf as she hunts.i wonder what he's thinking?he's so hadsom ,and sweet,and kind.suddenly she come back to the present the mouse she was hunting had darted right out of her paws.she prickled with embarestment.

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